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[camwyn]

It isn't much, but like I said in my earlier post, I'm nervous about my Starscream writing. Would those of y'all who know His Nibs better than I do be inclined to do me a favour and tell me if what I've got here sounds at all like him, and/or the level of overall suckitude? Playing Bumblebee and Ironhide is one thing, but this is something else....

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[ebony14.livejournal.com]

Well, I'm no expert, but it feels right to me. It's certainly a good start, although maybe a little self-centered whining about how it's all Megatron's fault, if only he'd listened to me, blahblahblah might be good. Or you could save that for when he actually talks to Shockwave. It's your rodeo.

[camwyn]

*nods* Fair enough. He was going to give the 'Why The Decepticons Lost And How They Could've Won If They'd Just Listened To Me' version of events when he got to Shocky anyway, but it probably doesn't hurt to throw in a little whining now. It's a long way to Varuna, after all.

[prodigal.livejournal.com]

You nailed it.

[camwyn]

Oh, good. Thank you.

[midnightlurker.livejournal.com]

I can more or less hear Chris Latta narrating this, so you're good to go. :)