H: H update

May. 5th, 2004 02:54 pm
camwyn: Me in a bomber jacket and jeans standing next to a green two-man North Andover Flight Academy helicopter. (cultural whackitude)
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The next six pages of Hellblazer: Hogwarts are at the beta readers'. Unless, of course, someone wants to volunteer to handle this bit along with the two I already have on it.

Worth noting that the ending currently feels a little bit abrupt, even though I had been planning on halting this segment at this point.

Date: 2004-05-05 12:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spiderine.livejournal.com
The ending of this bit seems fine by me. Yes, it's a bit abrupt, but that's appropriate for the subject matter, don't you think? Too bad about the poor victim tho. *sniffle*

Perhaps John should try smoking a pipe? Not permanently, but just give it a go one day when he can't find cigarettes. And then immediately reject it as too bloody twee. :)

House elf = good. Squid = hilarious!

Can't wait for start of term - I really want him to meet a stubborn, rule-breaking Harry (with Hedwig) and think, "is there some sort of *law* that any world's most powerful wizard has to be a stroppy teenager with glasses?" LOL!

Date: 2004-05-05 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] prodigal.livejournal.com
Of course, John could always just buy pipe tobacco and start rolling it into cigs...

Squid?

Date: 2004-05-05 01:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fireweaver.livejournal.com
Oh dear, what did John do to the squid? Can't wait for the next installment!

Beta readers?

Date: 2004-05-05 05:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarekofvulcan.livejournal.com
I'm a beta (and full-time) tester in RL, can I help? :-)

Date: 2004-05-05 07:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] prodigal.livejournal.com
I'm always willing to beta-read the H/H stuff. :)

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